Thursday, April 9, 2015

The Unique Island

There are many places in Florida that are beautiful and unique places, Dry Tortugas. It's a national park in the Florida Keys. This park is the most unique places in the world. This National Park has seven beautiful islands. What makes this unique is there are millions of bricks and different building structure and it's also very mystic. Dry Tortugas is famous for the sea life, coral reefs, and sunken shipwrecks. Many people from all over the world would come to this park to scuba dive, fish and camp with their families.  You can find it in the Gulf of Mexico; it is 70 miles away from the Keys. The island is 98 acres and has white sand to walk on.  People had told me that they heard about the island and told me read about how beautiful the island was but never visited and stayed in the island.  

“I have been there with my girlfriend two times and it’s such a beautiful view of the ocean. The only thing we needed to bring was our camping equipment and food. But we did have a really good time.”   
    Austin Veverka, 
                                   "It was a great experience especially with my girlfriend."


  1. This place sounds beautiful and I'm glad you write about it. The beginning, however, seems a little rushed and there are a few grammar problems. Despite these small mistakes, I loved how you wrote about the place. I also loved how you got a quote from someone. Most would not do that, yet you did and that makes you original.

  2. What a very interesting national park. Surprisingly I had never heard of this place until now and would most likely go to visit it sometime. The thing that shocked me the most was when you said it has seven different islands Wow! now that is amazing. Overall there are some grammatical errors but the story was catchy enough that i didn't pay much attention to it.